can sb rate my essay I wiLL be appreciated cuz am stiLL not that good at writing SAT essays

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<p>You forgot to capitalize the first letter in the sentence, that won’t be good impression to SAT graders. Your essay is to short, try to fill two pages. Its a 3 or 4.</p>

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