<p>@NaDaHaLdEsOuKi98 Yes write another example, and try to express your persuasive essay more. I would highly recommend a history example. For example, Martin Luther King.</p>
<p>And write clear, and have few grammar mistakes you can boost your score to 8+ (You will score high with a FULL two pages, and well though examples.)</p>
<p>Try to had bigger vocabulary words. If you follow these steps, you will score 9+. </p>
<p>This is a essay on the same prompt on yours, which I fell deserves a 9 or 10. <a href=“Should people take more responsibility for solving problems that affect their communities or the nation in general? | caseyanne41”>http://caseyanne41.■■■■■■■■■■■■■/2013/01/22/should-people-take-more-responsibility-for-solving-problems-that-affect-their-communities-or-the-nation-in-general/</a> </p>