can somebody please read my 300 word essay for engr. honors?

<p>i need some feedback, to make sure it sounds okay and if you could please suggest any improvements you think would make it sound better
i'm applying for engineering honors at UT.
btw, does anybody know how competitive it is? I got accepted to cockrell a week after applying but not sure about the honors
i'll message you the essay if you want to read it
thanks!</p>

<p>i'll read it...i finished my honors essay two weeks ago</p>

<p>I doubt I'll get it in seeing as how people with 2000+ SAT scores have been rejected...but it's worth a shot i guess.</p>