Can someone critique my Bryn Mawr essay?

<p>Preferably not applying this year.
I'll PM it to you. </p>

<p>Any input would be appreciated. Sorry if the grammar is a bit whack haha.</p>

<p>bump (10 char)</p>

<p>any takers? :]</p>

<p>bump.</p>

<p>i will seriously love you forever.</p>

<p>I'll help -- if you can be patient.</p>

<p>thanks i just pmed it.</p>

<p>for anyone else...it is not that long if that is any kind of consolation..</p>

<p>I'll check it out for u.</p>

<p>bump. </p>

<p>I want to submit my app, but this essay needs work :(</p>