Can someone give me an opinion on my activities statement?

College Essays
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Prompt: In 50-100 words, briefly explain how you decided which activity was the most important to you.

“Cross country has been very important to me all throughout high school. When I came into the sport, the team had just won a state championship and that was something I wanted to experience. By my sophomore year, I had made it to varsity and we won state for the third consecutive time. The streak was extended to four during my junior year and we hope to win our fifth straight state title this season. Cross country has been a great experience and has taught me an exceptional amount about my mental strength.”

I know it is short, but the limit is 100 words and it is currently 93. Please give an honest opinion

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it’s very informational about how good your school’s cross country team is but doesn’t really say that much about you. why you like cross country, besides that it taught you about your mental strength? I would expand on that idea, or add something else to explain why you chose to do cross country and why it’s important to you, aside from state titles.