can someone grade my AP Spanish Lang. Cartas?

<p>Are these good enough for a 5? Btw I know i missed some accents and have a few grammar mistakes. Gracias! </p>

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<p>While I can’t really grade these (I’m in AP myself), I don’t think that these would be good enough to net you a 5. Of course, your score depends on all of the sections combined, so you could in theory bomb one and still get a 5…but based on this, I’m not sure how well you would do.</p>

<p>If these guys are “tus amigos,” then you should not be addressing them as “estimado.” Would you email your friend, and start it off by saying “Esteemed John”…probs not… Your register is off throughout the writings, overall. You are using the “usted” form, but you’re speaking to your friends…conjugate for “tu” instead. Register is REALLY important. </p>

<p>Also, you have lots of grammar mistakes. “Creo que” does not trigger the use of the subjunctive "sea, your “si” clause is misconstructed, and “dije” is not the subjunctive form of “decir”…it means “I said.”</p>

<p>Is there a Spanish teacher that you can consult with? They could probably help you improve, and give you much better feedback than we can…</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>