<p>I'm applying to Davis and Irvine and was wondering if anyone is willing to look at my PS....or at least what I have done so far. I'm not finished yet but I want to know if I'm on the right track because I think the topic that I chose could be either a good or bad one.</p>
<p>bump. anyone care to help out? i really need someone to proofread it for me. thank you</p>