Can someone look over my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hello fellow CC-ers,</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone could take a look at my essay. The prompt asked me to describe the community around me and how it has shaped me and my values/aspirations /etc. I felt a little iffy about my response to the prompt and I wanna make sure that it's clear.</p>

<p>If anyone is willing, please post here so I can PM you! :) I can also look over essays for those who want some extra feedback.</p>

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<p>yeah sure I can read it.</p>

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<p>Send it to me :)</p>

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<p>Go for it</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can read it!</p>