<p>I'm not really sure what question it answers, I'll probably just go with "other." </p>
<p>I've re-written it a couple times but I'm still not happy with it. I was thinking about forgetting about it altogether and starting from scratch, but I can't think of anything else I would like to write about. </p>
<p>Please be as harsh as need be and as specific as possible, I need a very well-written and interesting essay since my intended major is English or Communication. </p>
<p>Also, I'll return the favor for anyone that reads my essay as well. </p>
<p>PM me if you'd like me to send it. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>