Can someone please go over my short essay answers???

College Essays
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<p>i have no one to go over it, since no one in my family has ever been to college, or is that good of a writer.</p>

<p>but it's really short, and its just answers to 4 short essay questions! Please help out! i really want to get into this program! ill PM it over to you, just leave a comment or something!</p>

<p>Thank in advance!</p>

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<p>I can!</p>

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<p>Me too!</p>

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<p>I would be happy to, if you don’t mind a parent point of view! :)</p>