I beg of you essay experts, answer my questions!

College Essays
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<p>I have written an essay, and I would like some people to objectively read it then answer the questions I have outlined about it.
I would just REALLY REALLY appreciate it if some people would look it over, and give me their overall impressions then answer my questions. It shouldn't be that hard of a task since I have outlined some specific questions; they should be easy to answer.</p>

<p>Although I'm not applying to competitive schools, my essay is kind of important because I have almost zero extracurricular activities, and (like just about all applicants) I am hoping for scholarships. </p>

<p>I welcome brutal honesty!</p>

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<p>PM me for the essay
THANK YOU!</p>

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<p>alrite...PM it</p>

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<p>hey pm me too</p>

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<p>Ill read it too. Pm me.</p>

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<p>I can read it. PM it over.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a glance</p>

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<p>Thanks so much for offering to read it everyone! I don't think I will need anymore help.</p>