Can someone please look over this short supplement

College Essays
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<p>I just wrote this, unfortunately i have had a hard time thinking of a subject for this supplement: What is one lesson you have learned that you would like to share with the college students and staff. Today my grandfather came other and he inspired me a month a writers block and a day before the supplement is due i wrote it. It is fresh off the press and hasn't been grammatically reviewed yet because i need to wait a day to catch my mistakes. Tell me what you think. Thanks guys!!</p>

<p>Its due tomorrow and i just read the caution for posting the essay so i guess i will pm if anyone wants to help me out. Thanks!!</p>

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<p>haha i have to write that same supplement right now...it is by far one of the worst questions, in my opinion, that they could have asked applicants to write about. as far as yours, it seems fine...you missed a few commas but that's small stuff.</p>

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<p>Thanks, i know commas are my weakness. It is the worse question ever, it was my hardest supplement.</p>

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<p>wellll...............I still don't understand...</p>