Can someone please whip out the red pen on my essays

<p>Could anyone who doesn't have too much on their plate at the moment please look over an essay or two of mine (maybe more if I'm lucky) and offer critical yet constructive advice on them. I would really appreciate another opinion. </p>

<p>Thanks a lot in advance!</p>

<p>Yes of course. Pm me and I’ll check it out.</p>

<p>I wouldn’t do that if I were you ThePanzer. This guy is also 17.</p>

<p>Sincerely,
Someone else looking for help on college essays</p>

<p>PM me if you want an adult’s opinion. My daughter wouldn’t let me read her essays because, according to her, I am the meanest dad on earth. But I do enjoy all your essays.</p>

<p>Haha, thanks Shan84, I definitely won’t be doing that.</p>