<p>Could anyone who doesn't have too much on their plate at the moment please look over an essay or two of mine (maybe more if I'm lucky) and offer critical yet constructive advice on them. I would really appreciate another opinion. </p>
<p>PM me if you want an adult’s opinion. My daughter wouldn’t let me read her essays because, according to her, I am the meanest dad on earth. But I do enjoy all your essays.</p>