<p>Hi, can someone read my essay and give any comments or advice that you have? Also, my essay is around a hundred words over the limit, so can someone help me shorten it? If anyone is interested, please post here or PM me.
The prompt is : Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. </p>
<p>Thank you so much!!</p>