Can someone read my essay?

My essay is rather weak right now, but it’s due in a few days! Would anyone be able to help read and comment? Thanks!

I can. I’m a current Cornell student.

I can too.

I’m a Cornell alumna. Happy to. Just cut and paste it into a PM. I don’t have a horse in this race, no student applying this or next year(s). I’m done.

i can too

The deadline was Jan 1, so I’m sure @thirstyrachel has already submitted their application and essay.