Can someone tell me what they think of my college application essay?

<p>The prompt was fairly unique. Summarized, it basically said to "show us yourself." </p>

<p>My essay is more controversial and deals with religion and politics. >:D</p>

<p>Anyone care to read it, tell me what they think?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Generally, controversial essays are frowned upon because they generally do not reveal your own personality.</p>

<p>Free free to PM your essay to me though… I’m off tomorrow, so I’ll probably read it.</p>