<p>My main worry is that I sound overly formal or pretentious, or that I'm writing more about the person that influenced me than myself. Can someone with experience here (dedicated member) give me some input? Thanks so much, appreciate it!</p>
<p>I’m semi experienced? (Read 5 or so essays here, and was told my comments were helpful. Does that count?) </p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’ll help, on a bit of a roll reading essays tonight</p>