<p>can anyone please grade my essay? thanks!</p>
<p>Prompt: Is the purpose of education to change the world?</p>
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<p>Education in our society is meant to change and improve the conditions of our world. With education comes advances in various fields of studies. Historically, education has brought about improvements in medicine, agriculture, equality, and many other things. It has become the foundation of our society and has developed knowledgeable and capable human beings. With the tools of education, our world has and will continue to change.</p>
<p>In the Green Revolution during the early 20th century, a massive abundance of crops became available. This revolution resulted from extensive research and discoveries in the field of agriculture which were fully dependent on education. Education, which had allowed scientists to make these discoveries, paved the way for the Green Revolution and resulted in a surplus of crops. The effects of the Green Revolution have been a great leap forward for our society. The Revolution cured a number of food shortages that had been prevalent beforehand. Next, it allowed the world population to increase through an improvement in human conditions. Because of these reasons, it is apparent that education has influenced our world in a positive way.</p>
<p>In the novel In the Time of the Butterflies, one could also see the neccessitty(?) of education's positive influence. Minerva Mirabal stressed the importance of attending a university for law studies for the reason that she would gain the ability to combat Rafael Trujillo's harsh dictatorship. Her determination in order to gain education shows how a person may perceive the effects an education can provide. Minerva's stay at the university proved to be effective as she gained the skills neccesarry(?) in toppling Trujillo's regime. She played an unsurmountable(?) role in the revolutionary movement and led rallies, gave speeches, and masterminded the distribution of weapons. All these motives were done for the sake of social justice and equality, showing that education works to change the world positively.</p>
<p>Additionally, in the novel Brave New World, this can also be seen. The novel, written by Aldous Huxley, depicts the sad seperation(?) of humans into a caste system determined by intelligence. Those who possess education have the ability to alter the world and do so, in what they claim is to improve the human condition. (?) By using propaganda, these high caste intellectuals trick their lower counterparts into believing that everyone is happy with their status. While readers see the corruption of this scene,</p>
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<p>I ran out of time.</p>