<p>Just want some constructive feedback to see if I'm going in the right direction thanks a bunch</p>
<p>I can do that for you, I’ll send you my essay to read!</p>
<p>i’d like to read yours! we can exchange our essays…</p>
<p>send it to me too!</p>
<p>Im putting the finishing touches on it right now, Ill send it to you guys tomorrow probably</p>