Care to critique a short "what are your academic interestests/planned major?" essay

<p>It's short! I want to make sure the wording makes sense and that the grammar is okay. Thank you in advance.</p>

<p>All I need is a quick look over to make sure it makes sense. It shouldn't take more than five minutes. I would appreciate it.</p>

<p>If you want, you can email me at <a href="mailto:brianmetcalf02@gmail.com">brianmetcalf02@gmail.com</a>
I'm not sure I'll be much help, but at least you'll get some feedback.</p>

<p>Thank you very much. Is it okay if I just send a private message?</p>

<p>Yeah, a PM would work. I'm not sure if I'll be able to get to it tonight.</p>

<p>I sent it. thank you so very very much.</p>

<p>you can pm me ill read it :)</p>

<p>Done with apps, pm me =]</p>

<p>i’m done with my apps a long time ago. you can email me if you still need some touching up</p>

<p>ill take a look if u still want</p>