Censorship Common App Essay! Help Please.

<p>I would really like some feedback on my Common app essay on censorship and growing up in China. Whatever feedback you could give would be really really helpful, as I'm an international and none too familiar with the US college app process. I'm afraid to post my essay directly on here. I'll PM it to anyone who cares to critique it for me. </p>

<p>Thanks :D</p>

<p>PM me. You don’t have much time. Most of the deadlines are Jan 1… </p>

<p>Plus you need to line up all recommendations, send test scores, transcripts. Some colleges may even ask for proof of financial availability. Not easy to get in the US colleges unless you are a multi-millionaire’s kid.</p>

<p>Thanks! I emailed it to you because I am unable to PM. Did you get it?</p>

<p>Sure! Just PM me!</p>