<p>Hi, I’m a graduating senior and currently attending a community college, I’m going to attend my state university during the fall, and thinking about transferring to another school after first semester because my state university is a bad ass. </p>
<p>Here are my stats:
ACT:30
GPA:3.8 (unweighted, top 5%)
Classes: Extremely rigorous, as rigorous as it can get in junior and senior year.
During my freshman and sophomore year, my mind was pretty fobbish, creating a total vacuum in both academics and social life. My latter part of the senior year is quite troubled, haunted by seniorities and depression, I got a D in calculus in the third quarter, and got a B and C in most subjects, got only 4 As, others are all Bs and maybe 1-2 Cs)
SAT I: sucks 1400 something out of 2400, hey, I didn’t even know english grammar when I took this crap.
SATII: Math II:700 U.S his:690 World His:740
ECs:
Student Page to the Maryland General Assembly
Nonviolence Club, founder and president
National Honor Society, 2 years.
Forensics Team
Envirothon Club
Environmental Club
Book Club
and other random stuff.</p>
<p>Went to community college twice, this summer I’m taking Statistics and Intro to Philosophy</p>
<p>Award:
AP Scholar with Distinction (I’m going to get a national AP Scholar this upcoming July, I’m pretty confident, haha)
Student of the Month
Art Award
and other random stuff</p>
<p>Hook:
I’m a poor Chinese immigrant who came to U.S at age fourteen, and basically started English from scratch. After suffering from four years of cultural awkwardness and financial destitution, I was recently once again pimped by my state university’s outrageous generosity for not giving me a single cent in attending their university. They somehow figured out that I had no choice but to attend their university, and after rejecting even to discuss with me about my financial status, poised themselves as financial imperialist, landlord, and Czar, whom present me, a proletariat, with the gift of a capitalist endeavor—20000 loans each year with compounding interest. (They don’t even give me stafford loan, they don’t even give me grant, they don’t give no nothing despite my EFC is 1/3 of the cheap tuition)
Additionally, I’m awesome at Chinese language and culture in every aspects imaginable. </p>
<p>I want to major in philosophy/international studies in BC if I were accepted. My reason for transfer being: the absence of international studies major in my current university, the absence of continental faculties in philosophy in my current university. </p>
<p>Suggest if I get like straight As in the first semester in my state university, do I stand a chance in transferring during the spring?
Please leave some critical comments. Tell me what should I improve and what should I not.
But unfortunately, my scientific prediction methods miserably failed in my application process. I was rejected by JHU, GT, GWU, and NYU because ???</p>