Hi everyone! I just thought I’d post and see since I’m currently in that lame duck period between finding out my EAs and the upcoming March madness.
I applied to UC Berkeley, UCLA, UC Davis, and UCSB- I’m ready for people to be brutally honest because everyone is always like “you’ll be fine!!” but I doubt myself ?
[Objective Breakdown]
Majors: Biology (Immunology and Pathogenesis) for UC Berkeley, Microbiology/Immunology/Molecular Genetics at UCLA, Pre-Biology at UCSB, and Global Disease Biology at Davis.
CA Student
3.75 UW/ 4.21 WGPA
Top 15% of class of 747
32 ACT
730 Bio-M, 620 Literature
7 AP’s, 5 Honors, 1 Dual Credit [AP Euro (4), AP English Lang (4), APUSH (5), AP Biology (5), AP Music Theory (4), AP US Gov (TBD), AP Psychology (TBD) + 2 semester credits for a college biotech class]
[Subjective Breakdown]
600+ Volunteer Hours as hospital intern
Nationally ranked pianist (14 years of playing)
Chamber violinist (9 years of playing)
Shaolin Kempo Karate (10 years, quit in sophomore year)
Race/Ethnicity: White/Male (I’m actually half Middle Eastern but it’s all the same to them)
Income Bracket: $150k+
Hooks: First gen American, first gen college, gay, Jewish
[Essay Breakdown]
Essay 1: Talked about my (current) experience working as an executive for the hosptial internship program I’m in (200+ students on two hosptial campuses), and how I took upon the job of completely renovating the communications system last year, and also how I’m managing the entire admissions and training process this year as well- more so trying to explain how my time working up the ladder (Intern → Shift Lead → Department Head → Executive) hopefully will have prepared me for the job itself.
Essay 2: Mostly about my passion for music. Touched upon how mom is a freelance artist and my dad is a (part-time) rock musician and even though they tried to get me to do both I never budged from being obsessed with classical music. Also briefly talked about competing at national level.
Essay 3: Past/Present/Future analysis of my coming out story in 2016- primarily how it dueled with my mental health as I did my best to prepare what it would be like coming out to my parents whom are split religiously/ethnically/politically. Related it mostly through a story of how one of my neighbor’s moms wouldn’t let me play with her son when I was like 9 because she caught me teaching him about fashion shows with his sister’s dolls.
Essay 4: Talked about my innate love for biology and medicine from three main sources- the first being AP Bio. The second was the time period in elementary school when my grandmother became my caretaker because my dad had late-stage cancer and she’s a science-obsessed woman who took me to aquariums, laboratories, and we experienced a 7.0 earthquake together in Maui one year. Lastly the third is my shameless addiction to zombie and apocalyptic movies (hey, natural disasters are always followed by disease).