Chances Or The Terrorists Win

<p>Hey, I would appreciate it greatly if I could just get some feedback of what all of yall think.</p>

<p>sats: 2100
sat II's: 740 math 670 u.s waiting on spanish
act: 31 ( dont know if this should be sent)
gpa: 96/100
courseload: 12 ap classes- the next closest person in my grade has will finish with 8
rank: none
location: long island, white</p>

<p>ecs( just the most important)</p>

<p>senior class president
national honor society president
wall street investors club president
spanish honor society president
news editor for school newspaper
comittee staff position for school's MODEL UN
captain of econ team competition</p>

<p>bunch of pretty regular honors/awards
ap scholar
'best business student in school'
two time scholar athlete</p>

<p>Hook</p>

<p>I am very interested in making music. I am a musical artist.I have recorded many songs and am working on the production of an official album. Inspired by my own musical endeavors, I decided to start my own music management company. The point of such is to promote local artists. This process has entailed: getting them shows, working on production of songs with them, financial matters, artwork, selling of compact discs, management, and promoting. Currently I am working with a few local acts and artists of many different styles I was hoping to convey my passion through business by using this as an example. </p>

<p>recs
counselor: glowing
teachers: will say one of best student in _____ years, other should be solid as well</p>

<p>I am wondering what my chances are at the following schools, any feed back is appreciated. thanks</p>

<p>Wharton (ED)
Duke
Northwestern
NYU-Stern
Cornell
Carnegie Mellon
Tufts
Brown
UVA
U Mich</p>

<p>In at Wharton so forget the rest.</p>

<p>what the heck does a 96/100 equate to unweighted ?/4.0</p>

<p>You have very good chances everywhere, what was the breakdown on the SAT? The only problem I see is that none of your schools seem to be definite safeties</p>

<p>nice leadership :) you have a good chance everywhere. where on long island r u?</p>

<p>red sox i think its like in my case a 3.89 unwegithed 4.2 weighted kind of </p>

<p>umm thanks college girl i guess binghamton( which i didnt mention) is my true safety</p>

<p>oh and the breakdown is 700 in each section</p>

<p>to the top yessir</p>

<p>wow. i wish i had your leadership roles etc. i think you have a pretty good chance at most of the schools on your list. especially if you are applying early decision to wharton. thats my guess though, if you have strong essays that will help a lot.</p>

<p>but stay away from titles like "chances or the terrorists win". thats .... ugh.</p>

<p>yeah the title of this thread is stupid, immature and insensitive... hopefully this was just a lapse in judgement, or else you'll have some development to do before your ready for college, but anyway your in at Wharton and if not then your in at NYU and a bunch of those other schools on your list so good luck</p>

<p>and2006 and rabid thanks for your feedback i appreciate it, but the title of this thread is a mockery of the new famous ' DO THIS BUY THIS or the terrorist win' that corporate america has created, im sure youve heard this, if you still think its insensitive then my bad, didnt mean to offend</p>

<p>up to the top</p>

<p>I thought the title was funny...</p>

<p>I wouldn't say you're in. Wharton is roughly as competitive as HYPS. You have good chances though.</p>

<p>seems like a good hook. but unless you have results to show for for your numerous club presidencies, they aren't too impressive. Quality > Quantity</p>

<p>Lots of leadership...your school must love you...</p>

<p>joethemole id like to think i have both quality and quantity when it comes to that</p>

<p>sr6622 what can i say, they dont mind me too much haha</p>

<p>I think you've overdone the leadership (but you're in at Wharton)</p>

<p>I mean your president of class and 5/6 clubs. There aren't enough hours in the week</p>

<p>tell me about it</p>

<p>lol, there must be very few leadership positions left at your school.</p>

<p>your post sounded extremely self-centered and egotistical. i hope that's not the image you painted of yourself in your application. </p>

<p>your scores are not stellar, your ecs could be questioned with so many leadership positions.. like the wall street investors club ;) penn ed apps are way up this year, making it even more difficult. wharton was already incredibly difficult to get into before this year. i'm not sure if you'll get in, to be honest. you've got a pretty good shot, but who knows with these things</p>