Chancing/Application Troubleshooting - Thanks, You're the Best!

<p>It’s that time of year, and I’m starting to feel pretty nervous. So, if you wouldn’t mind reading what I’ve got and filling me in on my weaknesses, I would really appreciate it. I’m sure there are plenty of people smarter than me out there and I’d love to hear your opinions. I know it’s a bit of a read, so feel free to skim. Thanks again, I really appreciate it!</p>

<p>Biographical Information:</p>

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<li>Male</li>
<li>Hispanic / Latino</li>
<li>Southern Texas</li>
<li>First Generation College Student</li>
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<p>Statistics and Numbers:</p>

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<li>Top 15% of Graduating Class (40/350)</li>
<li>GPA = (98.7 / 100 W) and (93.9 / 100 UW)</li>
<li>SAT = 2120 (Taken in One Sitting)</li>
<li>SAT II = Scores Pending</li>
<li>AP’s = Human Geography (4), World History (5), US History (5), Chemistry (4), Spanish (4), English Language (5)</li>
<li>National Spanish Exam = Top 10% Nationally </li>
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<p>Courses and School Information:</p>

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<li>Top 1% College Preparatory HS in South Texas</li>
<li>I’ve picked as rigorous of a course load as I possibly could, however underclassmen are only allowed one AP course per year. (H) indicates an honors course. </li>
<li>Freshman = Spanish II (H), Geometry (H), Human Geography (AP), English I (H), Biology I (H), Football, Track</li>
<li>Sophomore = Computer Science I (H), Algebra II (H), World History (AP), English II (H), Chemistry I (H), Spanish III (H), Art I</li>
<li>Junior = US History (AP), Chemistry II (AP), Computer Science II (AP), English III (AP), Spanish IV (AP), Pre-Calculus (H), Physics I (H)</li>
<li>Senior = Calculus BC (AP), Biology II (AP), English IV (AP), American Government (AP), Psychology (AP), Micro-Economics (AP), Internship Period</li>
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<p>Outside of School Courses:</p>

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<li>Introduction to Biology (MITx) = Passed</li>
<li>Solid State Chemistry (MITx) = Passed</li>
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<p>Sports:</p>

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<li>Football = I played for one year (Team MVP), but fractured my spinal column while training for sophomore year, so unfortunately I cannot play anymore.</li>
<li>Track = Sadly, the same situation as above.</li>
<li>Bodybuilding = After rehabilitating from my injury, I’ve gotten extremely involved in bodybuilding. I lift before school 5 times a week and do a little bit of personal training for people in my local community.</li>
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<p>In School Extra-Curricular Activities:</p>

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<li>National Honor Society = The work I’ve done while a part of NHS fits better in the “Outside of School EC” section.</li>
<li>National Spanish Honor Society = I take the National Spanish Exam (NSE) each year and screen experimental tests for my school district. For my NSHS service project, I taught English to dozens of Spanish-speaking elementary school kids at my high school while their parents were taking night classes.</li>
<li>Chemistry Club = I’ve taken groups of other students along with me to take the American Chemical Society’s (ACS) Exam and received the highest score in my district for two consecutive years.</li>
<li>Student / Board Liaison = Honestly, I was a little bothered that the Student Council kids didn’t actively participate and instead use their positions for résumé padding. So, I created (with the district’s help) three positions that act as conduits for student voice. We’ve had a lot of fun and have introduced new, experimental curriculum that teaches through application of knowledge, as well as internship connection outlets for students to find what they’re interested in. I hold the founder’s position and will pass the torch when I graduate. </li>
<li>“Student Aperture” = Building off of the last thing I mentioned, I decided to build an official academic organization at my HS (not an interest group since they have no power really), as a centralized hub for all of the awesome stuff coming out the student / board meetings. I coded a website, made podcasts, wrote papers and short articles, created a blog, and got featured in my city newspaper to help spread the word about what we thought was wrong with traditional education methods. If anyone is interested in knowing more, PM me and I’d love to tell you as much as I can!</li>
<li>Ultimate Frisbee Club = Just as a fun way to blow off stress, I helped create a club with about 100 members that meets weekly to play. I know it seems silly, but it has totally been worth it.</li>
<li>Academic Decathlon = I have been the team captain of my school’s decathlon team for all four years, where I’ve raised funding for each season, coordinated team study sessions, organized pre-season debates, and won several medals like, Team MVP (Region), 1st Interview (Region), 1st Speech (Region), and 1st Science (Region). As a team, we’ve gone to region twice and state once – and we’ve got a strong team this year so I hope we’ll be fortunate enough to go back!</li>
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<p>Outside of School Extra-Curricular Activities:</p>

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<li>3-Day-Start-Up = I’ve competed for two sessions in a 72-hour, hyper-condensed entrepreneurial start-up program in my city. Here, I’ve won team MVP twice, built a company (elaborated on later), and have made several amazing professional relationships that will definitely help me after college. My business pitches are all online as well.</li>
<li>Molecular Pathogens Research = Last summer, I spent 60 hours interning in the oncological ward of a pathogen’s lab. My responsibilities included DNA extraction, biomarker reading, scheduling and interacting with patients, and general solution preparation. I loved being able to work with gifted individuals in the field as well as learn more about the disease affecting my mother (thyroid cancer). </li>
<li>Pre-Clinical Research = The same summer, I spent another 60 hours learning how medicine goes from lab bench to patient bedside. My responsibilities included incubation, in vitro testing, and drug effectiveness testing. This job was especially valuable for me because I worked closely under a PhD who has helped me immensely with proper lab procedure.</li>
<li>“Spark Education” = Last summer, I, along with several other friends, built a community organization to teach STEM to underperforming middle school students in the impoverished portions of my community. We contacted over a dozen schools, hosted 10 weekend-long sessions with over 50 kids each time, and saw massive increases in their grades back at school. During the sessions which took place in a local co-working space, we split the groups up into teams, taught them Programming, Web Design, Entrepreneurship, and Robotics, and had them present to their parents. Honestly, getting to see them go from dejected to engaged was the most fulfilling thing you could imagine. At the end of the day, I’d like to say we inspired a new wave of local entrepreneurs and engineers!</li>
<li>Start-Up Venture = After the second 3-Day-Start-Up session, I kept in contact with my team and founded a new (yet-to-be-named) company that deals with severe problems affecting the academic publishing community (I’ve had to be vague because of intellectual property contracts). I hold the CFO and co-founder position. We’ve gotten 50,000$ of funding from investors, hired a team of 5 amazing programmers, established a primary market to test our beta, and garnered the attention of many philanthropists. Hey, now I can afford to go to college! Potentially, this project could be huge and I’m excited to see where it takes me. </li>
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<p>Recommendations:</p>

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<li>I have a humanities teacher and my district superintendent (I’m actually very close with him, so don’t worry, I’m not just “name dropping”) writing my two letters. I know how important these are and I’ve taken careful measure to make sure they are both very personal, intimate recommendations that focus on my as a person and not just a student.</li>
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<p>Essays:</p>

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<li>For my essay, I’ve chosen to write a short, metaphorical piece that relates lessons learned in the gym to lessons learned from real life. Honestly, I felt very passionate about it, especially after my back injury. The way I approach problems and deal with failure all comes from underneath the squat rack. So, I’ve spent months writing as openly and as personally as possible to help convey my voice and be as unique as possible. </li>
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<p>School List:</p>

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<li>Early Decision = Johns Hopkins University</li>
<li>Early Action = Northeastern University, UC San Diego, and UC Berkeley </li>
<li>Regular Decision = MIT, Tufts, Carnegie Mellon, UT, Texas A&M, Rice, and Boston University </li>
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<p>Thank you so much and I truly value each of your opinions and thoughts!</p>

<p>I may have forgotten some things, so I’ll edit and add as needed. Feel free to ask or message me if I forgot something obvious, I know I probably did.</p>

<p>Hop skippity BUMP…</p>

<p>Haha your application looks much better than mine, man! Your “outside of school ECs” literally make me jealous.</p>

<p>I’d say:
JH: Medium Reach (just based off the sheer selectivity of the school)
MIT: Medium/High Reach (same justificaiton)
CMU: High Match
UT: match/safety
Texas A&M: Safety
Rice: low reach/high match
BU: high match
Tufts: low reach
Northeastern: med/high match</p>

<p>I won’t give you my opinion regarding the two UC schools (I know that the way they admit students in the UC system is different and I’m not very familiar with it).</p>

<p>Hey, thanks for that. I wouldn’t be jealous, you’ve done an awesome job yourself. At the end of the day, we’re all on the same team. Good luck applying, I wish you the best of luck.</p>

<p>I like it good stuff but there is a slight problem texas has a lot of hispanics so there will be a large pool going against you… Than lets say maybe an eastern state good luck im so excited to apply :)</p>

<p>BU: match
JHU: High Match
Northeastern: Match
MIT: High Reach
Tufts: High Match/Low reach
CM: Match/Low Match
Rice: Low reach/ high match</p>

<p>You’ve got a good point, thank you. I’m excited for you too, best of luck! :)</p>

<p>Johns Hopkins University-Reach
2. Early Action = Northeastern University-Match, UC San Diego-Low Match, and UC Berkeley-Low Reach
3. Regular Decision = MIT-High Reach, Tufts-Reach, Carnegie Mellon-Reach,Rice-High Match, and Boston University-Low Match</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Does anyone else have an opinion before this gets buried?</p>

<p>Just as a reminder: there will be a lot of talented applicants who will be applying ED for JHU. But as for the other schools, you’ll most likely make it in. Also, you nationality might help. Best of luck!</p>

<p>Thanks, tguan! Best of luck to you as well.</p>

<p>Also, I forgot to mention that I have an outstanding recommendation letter coming from a Johns Hopkins alumnus - whom I happen to be working with as well. He has forwarded my information along with his review to the admissions board.</p>

<p>You responded on mine so I will respond to yours!</p>

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<li>Early Decision =
Johns Hopkins University -Reach (it’s overall very selective)</li>
<li>Early Action = Northeastern University - Match
UC San Diego - Low Match
UC Berkeley - High Match/Low Reach</li>
<li>Regular Decision =
MIT - Low Reach (based off general selectivity but you look awesome)
Tufts - High match
Carnegie Mellon - Reach
UT - safety/ low match
Texas A&M - safety/low match
Rice - High match
Boston University - Low Match</li>
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<p>Hope this helped! All of your extra curriculars look fantastic! Your SATs are also great. Have you considered ACTs? I’m not sure how you’re GPA works but it looks pretty good from what I assume. I think overall you should try for all of these and have a pretty good chance of getting into most of then, if not all.</p>

<p>It did, thank you so much! I have considered the ACT, but I’ll only be using it for my regular decision schools since the scores wouldn’t be in by the early deadline. Yeah, my GPA system is weird, although I tried converting it. I think it is about a 3.74 unweighted and a 4.33 weighted.</p>