<p>Could someone critique my University of Chicago essay?</p>
<p>The prompt is "Find x"</p>
<p>And my answer is "X = me" and I go about elaborating my take on how i found x and what I feel it means in my life</p>
<p>Please !! I will PM you if you are willing. Thank you so much!</p>
<p>Edit:</p>
<p>I understand that there may be a few grammatically incorrect phrases here and there, but please focus on the meat of the essay and your thought on it. Thanks again!</p>
<p>This might just be me, but I’m feeling this approach to Find x will be done a lot. Is this not an identity thing?</p>
<p>ahhhhh yeaa… it might be an approach too commonly used
but may i ask what you mean by identity? you mean like “who am I” sort of thing?</p>
<p>well there’s only so many things x can be. i thought my x was pretty unique but then again, i’m sure there are others who are using it.</p>
<p>sorry i can’t say what it is ;)</p>
<p>I’ll give it a read. Just PM me.</p>
<p>I’m planning to EA Chicago. I think that associating X=me is rather cliche.
Oh well, it might work. I’ll give it a read.</p>
<p>I’ll comment on your essay</p>
<p>I’ll read it-- sounds intriguing!</p>
<p>I’ll read over it</p>
<p>PM me your essay and I can get back to you in 24 hours.</p>
<p>PM here too.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind taking a look at it and providing some feedback.</p>