College Essay Critique - All help greatly appreciated!

College Essays
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<p>Hi! Thanks for stopping by. I've written two college essays for an application, and I would love to hear what you think of them. :) The topics are the following: </p>

<p>A: "Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you."</p>

<p>B : "Choose an issue of importance to you—the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope—and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation."</p>

<p>I would appreciate any and all feedback on both of these essays, or just one of them. Please just leave a reply and I'll PM you. :) Thanks so much in advance!</p>

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<p>I can read them.</p>

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<p>Oh, it appears I need to reach 15 posts before I can use private messaging. When I reach the limit, I’ll PM you - sorry!</p>

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<p>I’ll read them.</p>

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<p>I can read them. Just PM me!</p>

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<p>I can PM you my email and you can send it to me :)</p>