Critique my essay about crappy admissions process pl0x

College Essays
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<p>"Choose an issue of importance to you—the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope—and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation."</p>

<p>othanks.</p>

<p>anyone wanna help? :'D</p>

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<p>Send it over!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it and critique! :slight_smile: PM it over!</p>

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<p>Id be happy to read it. pm it over</p>