College Essay Critique

Parents Forum
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<p>Well, I'm sorry to bother all of you but I decided to post this thread here (as opposed to the College Essay forum) because I thought that the parents here would have a better idea than some of the people on the College Essay Forum. And because I'm rather cautious in dealing with some of the people on the College Essay Forum who have oddly enough, 10-30 posts but desire to read an essay.</p>

<p>I would deeply appreciate it if some kind souls could please post here and express their interest. :D</p>

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<p>OK, pm me. I'm an English teacher--I'll give you an honest opinion.</p>

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<p>Thank you, I appreciate it. And no ill feelings to all the other users, I understand that many of you may not be interested, but thank you for spending the time looking at my thread. I guess I'll just go to the College Essay section for more :)</p>