<p>Hello, I'm writing an essay for colleges. I'm not a great or terrible writer, but my essay tend to sometimes digress or not backed up with enough evidence. Can anyone help me? Thank you very much</p>
<p>What specifically are you having trouble with?
To me, it seems like you need to focus when writing. What may help is to make an outline of what you want to say, and what you want the reader to come away thinking.
Writing it down always helps me. Once i have a goal, I can write without rambling and getting off onto tangent subjects much more efficiantly.</p>
<p>Hope that that helped. :D</p>
<p>For every essay..I tend to "freewrite"...basically just keep writing and writing till i get sick of the topic..then I read what I wrote--from that I list out my main points, forming an outline for my essay. Then I stick to the outline and write a draft.</p>
<p>good luck.</p>
<p>thanks for the feedback, I finnished my essay and i would like someone to comment, look it over or review it for me. If anyone is willing to do that I would greatly appreciate it</p>