<p>i need brutally honest proofreaders for my common app college essay...its about my life experience in 2 contrasting cultures. I've been working on it for a while and am still highly unsatisfied... I feel that it lacks something...Thus, i need brutal proofreaders who are ready to shred it apart. So any volunteers?</p>
<p>I could take a look at it and offer some feedback. Feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>i'm brutal and very comprehensive (don't be surprised if you get like several hundred words worth of critiques). but be certain that it is unique enough that if you were not desiring a second opinion you could send it out today. so, if you're up for it, email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>bump...I need more readers..</p>
<p>Sounds interesting; I'll read it if you like, pm me. I like proofreading better than writing, myself :) I will shred it to BITS if you so wish :D</p>
<p>PM me.</p>