college essay revision

<p>hey guys, </p>

<p>I was wondering if I can get someone to read my essay to Baruch Honors. It's about a page but I definitely need to cut out some parts and change the wording of some. </p>

<p>I'm a terrible writer.</p>

<p>thanks in advance! </p>

<p>PM.</p>

<p>Don't do this online!!! Anyone could steal your essay and use it. Ask an English teacher or another good writer you know. DO NOT SEND YOUR ESSAY TO SOMEONE WHO YOU DON'T KNOW OVER THE INTERNET!!!</p>

<p>I'll look at it. I've looked at many essays, and you won't find any complaints about me...Just trying to help out.</p>

<p>I'll read it...I'm an 08 applicant, but I'm not applying to any CUNY schools, and there haven't been any complaints about me. I'm a pretty good writer and have done lots of peer editing all through HS.</p>