College essay topic

Hi guys i just wanted to know if my essay topic sounds interesting. I am venezuelan and have lived in this country for 3 years and wanted to write my essay about my experience in the criminal and economical crisis of venezuela by describing the first time i experienced crime at a church during a baptism and how this anecdote opened my eyes about venezuela’s situation and how from that moment on, helping each other was the way to survive and how this made me humble and sympathetic towards humanity.

Love it.

I’d like to read more of this.

Best of luck.

Thank you!!

I think this is really good and interesting, being a Venezuelan myself I know how the current situations greatly impacted our community and the way we view life in general and I believe it does shape us as individuals. anyway really love the topic!!

I find it interesting. However you only have 650 words. Good luck!