Hello can someone proofread this and let me know if I should change/add anything before sending? Thank you!
"Hi (interviewer’s name)! I just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to interview me. I enjoyed talking with you and learning more about campus life and classes at Middlebury. You were very helpful in answering all of my questions, and I gained insight about the learning environment and close-knit community at Middlebury.
whoops i used the word insight twice… also i would like to add somewhere in there about how after the interview i realized middlebury is the perfect fit for me, which is the honest truth.
It is fine…but if you could add a detail that would be better…for example, making stuff up…“I particularly liked your description of the freshman snowball fight tradition!”