<p>Will someone help me with my activity essay? My original was about 450 words but I got it own to 307. I need help getting it down some more because I do not really know how descriptive it should be and stuff like that. I am also using this for my Penn State Personal Statement. For that it is about 500 CHARACTERS over the limit. (The limit is 1200 characters)</p>
<p>Ill PM it if anyone wants to read it and help me out</p>