<p>hello,</p>
<p>I'm struggling to reduce the word count for my common app diversity essay as well as making it more coherent and readable X) can anyone help read through it and see if I can get the message across?</p>
<p>thanks (:</p>
<p>i'd be glad to help. Just hit me up with a pm :)</p>
<p>i'm an 08er, i'd be willing to help if you pm it</p>
<p>pm or email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>