Common App Essay: Bruce Lee as influential "historical figure"

<p>The prompt is "Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence."</p>

<p>My chosen person is Bruce Lee.</p>

<p>Anyone care to read this essay and give me some feedback?</p>

<p>sure pm me. I chose the same topic and did Orwell's 1984.</p>

<p>Bump, 10char.</p>

<p>i d love to read</p>

<p>Any more? I'm willing to do an exchange (will read and give equally detailed feedback). I think I'm pretty good at giving feedback, so please let me know if you're interested.</p>

<p>Still looking for readers here.</p>

<p>I still have yet to get any real feedback on this essay. Anyone up to it? Please help; I'd appreciate it so much!</p>

<p>I'll read it for you. PM me.</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>Sorry; I'm looking for people who aren't applying to the same schools.</p>

<p>Still looking for readers!</p>

<p>hi. pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>

<p>sure. pm it to me</p>

<p>Thanks for all the help, everyone! I've changed the wording and content of the essay significantly. Anyone want to read and critique the new version? Help is very much appreciated, as always, and I'm willing to trade detailed feedback.</p>

<p>I'll trade you?</p>

<p>sure, I'll re-read it.</p>

<p>pm me!!!!1111</p>

<p>haha are you a member of mychances? I'm pretty sure your essay just popped up on the essay evaluator, or else its someone elses</p>

<p>Yeah, that would be mine. :P</p>

<p>haha Ill read it eventually! That's so funny haha</p>