<p>Hi. So I'm writing the personal statement using this topic:</p>
<p>Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and
explain that influence.</p>
<p>and I was wondering if my lead really captures the reader. I would pm everybody my essay, but I'm suffering from writer's block so all I really have is the lead. PM if you're interested in reading it.</p>