<p>Hi!</p>
<p>Can anyone please peruse my commonapp essay? I am applying as a transfer to 2 business schools and 2 other unis (lacs). The main problem that I find with my essay is that it leans more towards business which can put off the adcoms of the liberal arts colleges I am applying to. They are all very top-notch. </p>
<p>Secondly, I don't know how to customise my essay. I have heard that it's possible to send different commonapp essays to different unis. Can you tell me how?</p>
<p>Thanks a lot :)</p>
<p>of course, post it or send it to me and i’ll have a look!</p>
<p>To customize your essay, you will have to create different versions of the Common App for the different sets of colleges that you are applying to. For each version, select a set of colleges and upload the essay you choose. Don’t worry, all the other information from your first version gets transferred, so you don’t need to type it out again.</p>
<p>Instructions on creating multiple Common App versions can be found by clicking ‘Instructions’ in the left hand side menu of your screen, and going to the sub-heading ‘Application Versions’.</p>
<p>Alternatively, follow the instructions of the third post of this thread: <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/transfer-students/447590-multiple-versions-common-app.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/transfer-students/447590-multiple-versions-common-app.html</a></p>
<p>Good luck!</p>
<p>sure ill read it! PM me!</p>
<p>I’ll help you with your essay. I’m also applying to transfer to business schools and I could definitely give you pointers on how to improve it.</p>