hey, would anyone mind reading my common app essay if i sent it to them? its very rough and about 200 words over the limit and i would love any feedback or criticism 
id love to help!!
i’d be so into it!!! and i’ve already written mine, so it’s not like i’m going to plagiarize you
no problem
pm me
Why not get it down to the 650 words you think are best, then ask someone else’s opinion?