Someone Help My Common App Essay!

<p>Hi There,
I have written my common app essay on choice #3: Reflect on a time you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?</p>

<p>I am proud of my work, but it is 880 words. The word limit for the essay is 650. I am in trouble, as you can see. Can anyone take a look and suggest some edits? Any help would be appreciated, thank you!</p>

<p>Ill take a look</p>

<p>@Esat936 , thank you! Just messaged you </p>

<p>Of course</p>

<p>You can write the lines that go over the word limit in the Additional Comments section as long as you state that you are continuing your essay in that section</p>