Common App Essay on my identity

<p>I would really, really, reeeaaallllly appreciate it if someone could take a look at my Common app essay. Just ask for PM.
Be honest with your critiques =p</p>

<p>I will give you some feedback on your work. just PM it to me</p>

<p>PM over if you would like to~</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it if you PM it to me.</p>

<p>Pm it over :D</p>

<p>sure, just pm me.</p>

<p>I’ll critique it, PM it over :)</p>

<p>sure, PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>i’d like to help</p>