<p>Hey guys, I wrote my Common App essay a while back, and now that I'm rereading it in preparation to send it off, I'm having second thoughts. I'm worried that it might be a little too informal and dumb for the schools I'm applying to, i.e. Northwestern, NYU, USC. So, would you guys mind reading it over and giving me some feedback? I'll PM it to you if you're interested, it's not very long, and it's kinda funny!</p>
<p>Also, I’m wondering if I should submit an essay for that additional circumstances question. I’m gay, and I haven’t included that in any of the other questions, so should I tell that here?</p>
<p>Bumpbumpbump</p>
<p>DO NOT post it for us to read!</p>
<p>why dont you ask your high school teachers to check it out? youll get a more honest and impartial and correct opinion. </p>
<p>im tired of saying this to the people in this forum. theyre always like “chance me” or “review my personal statement” or “review my essay” and stuffl. im just tired of it:D</p>
<p>I’ll read it :)</p>