my kind of out there essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi!</p>

<p>So I wrote this not exactly conventional essay (it's not extremely crazy either... I don't think) for the common app next year. Anyone willing to take a look? It's really rough, and just an idea. I liked it because I'm usually play it pretty safe. However, I'm worried about sounding like a totally insensitive, sheltered, self-centered [insert expletive here]. This was NOT my intention. I 100% understand why I might, though. I want to know what this essay says about me, whether I have a solid sense of voice, and whether that voice and info are completely repellent or not. :) Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>I’m game. XD This is exactly what I’ll struggle with in my essays. PM me</p>

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<p>Thanks! PMing you right now :)</p>

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<p>it seems like an interesting essay; pm me- ill take a look at it</p>

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<p>PM me? 10char</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look if u want…</p>

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<p>Thanks, you guys are awesome :)</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a look.</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM it to me if you’d like. I composed a rather risky essay for Brown, and it apparently worked. :)</p>

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<p>PM me it! :slight_smile: I’m interested.</p>

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<p>PM me! =) I’m intrigued.</p>

<p>If it’s any comfort, I’m a rising sophomore; college app season is still a few years off, so I probably won’t remember this essay anyway, lol.</p>

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<p>I wanna read it!</p>

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<p>Yo, I’ll read it. I’ll be a rising freshman in college (whoot!) PM me.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it!!
I’m new to CC, but English (especially editing) is my love, so go ahead :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me. If you dont want to because I have a low post count and my account is pretty new, I’ll understand. But I’ve been writing for several years and I’ve interned at a major newspaper, so I can help!!</p>

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<p>PM it to me, if you are still doing it!</p>

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<p>i would like to read and give feedback too!</p>

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<p>PM me and I will take a look.</p>