Common app Essay topic opinions

Hey, I live in a rural county in North Carolina. I have unfortunately had my house completely flooded twice, once during Matthew, and now during Florence. For my essay I was thinking about going into detail about how having to juggle losing everything, rebuilding my house, and still doing well in school helped me develop as a person only to have to undergo the same thing again during my senior year where I am preparing for colleges.

I felt this would be good as it’s not generic but it may be “to personal.” If any of y’all had opinions I would appreciate them.

Hi Tyson -

Sorry to hear you’re going through another flood. I don’ think this is too personal for a college essay topic. The essay is about YOU - not about the floods. I think you have the right approach in talking about your response to losing everything - again - in the midst of a chaotic time. How what you learned the last time helps you know that this time regardless of the material stuff you’ve lost, you’re a survivor blah blah blah.

I would probably avoid focussing too much on “still doing well in school” because your transcript will tell that for you.

As is said often here - show, don’t tell. A few descriptive words can help the reader feel what you’re feeling.

Best of luck to you!

Be aware that, applying to a school in NC, there may be many who experienced the floods. Is there anything that shows the college more than loss and personal/family recovery? Eg, you volunteered to help others in some ways (especially since you went through this before and know the needs.)

Could be an excellent topic which shows hardship, maturation & reflection.