Common App Prompt 1 Essay

<p>Hello!</p>

<p>I wrote a simple, personal story for the first Common Application prompt. I was rejected from my early action school and, while this essay may not have been the root cause (considering the college's selectivity), I am hoping to apply to other top schools and would like input on it.
I would prefer readers who are already in college or other adults… no offense to fellow high schoolers! Thanks!</p>

<p>Transfer student writing his transfer essay checking in </p>

<p>I’ll take a look. </p>