<p>Hey guys, so I'm done with my common app man essay, but I'm really not satisfied with it. I've really been struggling with my feelings about it for weeks now. I feel like it's really cliche, but I also feel that it highlights my personality and life well... so would anybody like to review it and give an outsider's perspective? I've PMed several reviewers out there with no response, so I'm trying something new by posting here. </p>
<p>I would like really strong reviewers who can be brutally honest about my essay and really give detailed comments and feedback (and not just fluff and generalities). I need reviewers who will spend quality time to really review it and give really specific and long feedback and not just lightly read it and say it was good (which my teachers have done). If you could help out, please just PM me with your email and we'll go from there. Thanks so much!</p>