Decision: Deferred
UPDATE: Decision: Accepted
Name of Cornell College you applied to: School of Human Ecology, majoring in Human Biology, Health, and Society
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 680 R, 760 M, 680 W
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT II: 760 Bio M, 770 Math II
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.79
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 71/3779
AP (place score in parenthesis): Did not submit scores, but
AP World (3), AP Euro (5), AP Stat (5), AP Eng Lang (4), AP Bio (4), APUSH (3),
IB (place score in parenthesis): IB Physics (5), IB Math SL (6), Scores not submitted
Senior Year Course Load:
IB Spanish SL, Bio HL, Eng Literature HL, History of Americas HL, Theory of Knowledge (IB Class), AP Calc, AP Macro
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):
No Major awards, greatest I received were 2nd team all conference for golf in sophomore year, I received placing at state level competitions but never submitted because they came after submissions
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Varsity Golf (4 Year letter recipient, Senior year team captain, Rookie of the year, MVP sophomore year)
Mu Alpha Theta (3 year participant, helped in reestablishing the club following the loss of a sponsor)
Science Olympiad (Vice President)
Ultimate Frisbee Club (Founder, President)
Job/Work Experience:
Golf Course, 6 months during junior year
Pretzel Shop, 3 months during senior year
Volunteer/Community service:
Volunteered at a Buddhist Temple during junior/senior year
Volunteered as part of a junior golf association
Summer Activities:
Volunteered at a Buddhist Temple
Took AP Macro
Worked out a lot? Didn’t put that on my app lol
Essays: 6/10 common app, 7/10 cornell essay. Cornell essay really showed me, but wasn’t perfectly written
Teacher Recommendation: 9/10 from an english teacher who loved me sophomore year, ??/10 from a bio teacher who had me for two years and liked me a lot, but had to write a bunch of recs for a lot of people
Counselor Rec: 5/10??? I hear a lot of mixed reviews about even getting a counselor rec but she basically just stated my objectives and said I was cool
Additional Rec: N/A
Interview:N/A
Other: Nothing to see here really
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Human Biology, Health and Society
State (if domestic applicant): Florida
Country (if international applicant): United States
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: <125,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):
Dad was a medical researcher, and I was able to put that as legacy, but not sure if they took that into account that much, he wasn’t a professor or anyone intensely involved with the school system
Reflection
Strengths:
Held high level leaderships in almost every extracurricular I participated in, and I had a clear idea what I wanted from college
What you tried to focus on in your application - any hooks you tried to make for yourself:
I presented that I had a problem that I really wanted to solve in my essay, and how HBHS major was an absolute perfect fit for my goals.
Weaknesses: Objectives were all substandard, but because I applied to Human Ecology it might’ve been different? They don’t give hard stats for individual colleges so I’m unsure, SAT was about 50% but GPA was poor
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected:
Honestly unsure, getting off the waitlist was very, very surprising, but if I were to give it one reason it’d be extracurriculars and interest in the school
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected:
Rejected at:
Brown
JHU
Duke
Emory (accepted into Oxford)
Rice
UNC Chapel Hill
WashU
I even ED’d to one of the above colleges, no early action applications though.
Accepted to:
University of Florida
University of South Florida
Your “Big Red” factor - the most unique thing in your application:
I know a lot of people have a lot of extracurriculars listed, but my essay was about my extracurricular and I was genuinely involved in trying to make clubs and such amazing, unlike people who attend merely to put it on their app.