<p>Hey all, I could really use some input on my personal statement essay. This is my first draft. So please feel free to butcher the s&*# out of it. </p>
<p>Prompt# 2 Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>
<p>For the rest of my life, I will carry a major burden. It is a constant heaviness, an immense pressure. This constant burden, this responsibility of mine, is the single greatest blessing in my life. It will not allow me to falter. This duty I have to fulfill exhumes a driving force within me, a will and determination to succeed. I bare the blessing of parenthood. I am a young father and a fianc</p>