Could somebody please read my (very short) common app extracurricular essay?

College Essays
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<p>Deadline is in 13 days and I still need it to be edited. Any help/feedback would be very much appreciated.</p>

<p>Post here and I'll PM you.</p>

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<p>PM me , I will check flow and structure</p>

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<p>feel free to Pm me</p>

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<p>PM me if you still want</p>

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<p>Same as ^, I’d be happy to let you know what I think of its flow and what it says about you</p>